you're strong in english............let's play

I think the best way to improve 'anything' is by exercising. Think we can get on together using our skills..!!!

The game is;
Writing a short story, article ..etc "less than 100 words, I'd say" . The member wants to practise 'auditor' needs to go through the story, article...etc and tries to correct grammar, spelling ..etc. "with reasons for each correction"

Then, the auditor 'the next member' needs writing its own >>> and so one.

If no mistakes found, that means YOU ARE STRONG ..

Ready..! Find some mistakes

once upon a time,
two friends walked in the desert , they fight , so one of them slapped the other one on his cheek
but the friend who was slapped wrote on the land:-
today my best friend slapped me on my cheek
then they continued, they arrived at an oasis , they decided to take a path
the one who was slapped got stuck in the mire and started drowning
but his friend saved him
he wrote in a stone :-
today my friend saved my life
his friend became surprised and said
after i hurt u, u wrote on the land,& now u wrote on the stone
the other friend replied:-

When someone hurts us, we should write it down in sand where winds of forgiveness can erase it away. But, when someone does something good for us, we must engrave it in stone where no wind can ever erase it."


LEARN TO WRITE YOUR HURTS IN THE SAND, AND TO CARVE YOUR BENEFITS IN STONE